I have to die for it,
I have to live for it
That's my fate, that's destiny
The true destiny of every soldier like me
Autumn, spring, season other
I have to work for my mother
That's my fate, that's the destiny
I want to protect this land as long as I live
Even if I die, i will see over it.
I maybe not a hero of my land
But I am a child of my land
I want to shield it as long as I can
That's a destiny, that's the fate I want to bear.
I do not walk unknowing the risk upon the way, as I know
My mother travels with me every day.
Sand, land and others too is my mother who is dear.
I have to die for it,
I have to live for it
That's a fate, that's the destiny I want to bear.
-Ryan
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Author:
ryan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was my very first poem. I wrote it when I was 12. I am still a very inexperienced poet or writer but I hope that you will express your opinions.🙂
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Hello Ryan,quite a poem for a 12 yr old,write some more.I am new to sharing also.kinda scary in a good way
Thankyou😊
For now I'll keep sharing some of my old poems. You shouldn't be scared, It's proving to be good to me.
Thanks Ryan,I'm not really to scared,just throw something out,if it resonates with someone,great
Such a unique poem Ryan! How about you share the poet's meaning of this poem as well as continue publishing! Success
Sure.
I'll edit it later. Thankyou
I'm sorry, but I don't agree with your thoughts
no, you Do NOT
Have TO
anything...
You get to chose!
always
you get A choice!
'in my humble opinion'
but still, I can appreciate
how impassioned this poem, reads
thanks for sharing
It is based on the life of a soldier who had aldready chose his path i.e. to work for his country. Thankyou for your opinion 🙂
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