L-O-V-E
Ray Finch
My girlfriend one day said to me
look into my eyes tell me what you see
Because I really need to know for sure
Your love for me is forever more
So I looked into her eyes
And what I saw to my surprise
They reflected right back to me
The letters
L-O-V-E
I smiled, as I then replied
You’re the girl to be my bride
And as I got onto one knee
She was staring down at me
Then on what would be our special day
The five famous words I then did say
‘WILL YOU BE MY BRIDE’
She gasped out, and then replied
?
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Author:
Finchy (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
nice poem with positive vibes, Bravo !
thank you very much Sally always nice to get a comment
Awesome poem, Ray! Just wondering if she said yes or no! But a wonderful love poem. Thanks for sharing!
Still waiting lol
thank you very much for your kind comment Christina
Sounds like she got more than she was expecting. Give her time Ray, she'll come around. 😊👍
Ha ha thanks i will do 🙂
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