untitled 1 (bones)

charlie10

"go close the door" 

the aloneness is chilling in my bones

scratching, reaching, for something more

my ears are drowning in his beauty

crisp leaves crunch. sticky mud sticks

no sun, but no moon.

  • Author: charlie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 17th, 2022 10:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: this ones about my boyfriend. the 3ish lines reference the awkwardness when you're making out and he has to shut the door so your dad doesn't walk in. the fourth line is about me listening to him talk/seeing him/ listening to music. the last 2 lines talk about one time when we explored the forest behind his house bare foot at sunset. an amazing time
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  • Christina8

    All in all a great poem! By the way, welcome to MPS! When paired with the authors notes it makes more sense and I think its wonderful. Great job!

  • dean langmuir

    I like the line my ears are drowning in loud beauty,poem on



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