"go close the door"
the aloneness is chilling in my bones
scratching, reaching, for something more
my ears are drowning in his beauty
crisp leaves crunch. sticky mud sticks
no sun, but no moon.
-
Author:
charlie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 17th, 2022 10:04
- Comment from author about the poem: this ones about my boyfriend. the 3ish lines reference the awkwardness when you're making out and he has to shut the door so your dad doesn't walk in. the fourth line is about me listening to him talk/seeing him/ listening to music. the last 2 lines talk about one time when we explored the forest behind his house bare foot at sunset. an amazing time
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 22
Offline)
Comments2
All in all a great poem! By the way, welcome to MPS! When paired with the authors notes it makes more sense and I think its wonderful. Great job!
I like the line my ears are drowning in loud beauty,poem on
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.