and while some people deserve much more, some really deserve to see hell in this life, like those who use others and throw them away like they’re nothing.
Nothing hurts more than trying ur best and still not being good enough.
so many, that can relate
to the layers of depth
in your subtle words...
these are the poems, we go back to
time n again
each time, gleaning a little more
about ourselves
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
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Sad writing .. some people deserve so much more than they receive . I know I feel that way .. why have I been through so much sadness , why ..
I guess that we mature off of pain not age.
and while some people deserve much more, some really deserve to see hell in this life, like those who use others and throw them away like they’re nothing.
Nothing hurts more than trying ur best and still not being good enough.
I understand it’s not nice to feel that way ..
I think their still is a girl who disserves abunch.good one,poem on and take care.
Of course , you deserve more, have faith,you will get it
so many, that can relate
to the layers of depth
in your subtle words...
these are the poems, we go back to
time n again
each time, gleaning a little more
about ourselves
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
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