Aye Aye Captain! Land Ahoy,
Every journey has a destination.
You are wandering in the doldrums
be bold and leave the hesitation.
In the horse latitudes
throw off some burden,
Let go of the old past
so that life could be certain.
Take control of your ship,
moving the wheel of destiny.
Feel the fragrance of fresh wind
and let go of deeper scrutiny.
You will surely find a mate,
to help you across seas seven.
together you shall reach,
at the gates of heaven.
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 22nd, 2022 01:03
- Comment from author about the poem: Are we really in control of our destiny? Alone? The girl certainly feels so while his lover nudges her to take control and with his help, they can make most of thier lives.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
'be bold and leave the hesitation.'
a lovely take on a carpe diem poem
thanks for sharing
Thank you so much !
I love the feeling you evoke of "Taking control and steering your own ship", love that sentiment, the ability to finally have confidence in yourself and in another. Wonderful poem!
Thank you so much!
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