Senryu 9


Grey, now gone away

colour returns to my mind

I’m bursting with joy.


  • Accidental Poet

    I'm bursting with joy that you're bursting with joy. 😁

    • Teddy.15

      I'm bursting with joy because you are dear.A.P lol 🀣 I am in COVID land even today really I'm just bursting with grumpyness. πŸ’– But you have cheered me up no end. πŸ’– Thank you dear friend..

      • Accidental Poet

        Sorry to hear you're still in covid land. And delighted to cheer you up dear friend. 🌹

      • dusk arising

        Yep sprung is spring. The tulip tree in my garden has this years leafbuds and i'm wondering if this will be her first year of blossom. They don't blossom until they are ready to and then not every year.

        Thank you for an uplifting gift in these troubled days.

        • Teddy.15

          Ah let me know if she blossoms then, my best friend told me it's been a very warm march in the UK, thank you for uplifting me dear Dusk, at least I know I can be myself around my beautiful friends online. πŸ’– 🌈

        • L. B. Mek

          how to poetically emote, Spring
          without using the word, itself?
          (a lovely shorty, dear Poetess)
          thank you!

          • Teddy.15

            Dear Mek, this poem has my indulgence of personal being too, lol 🀣 I'm still a grumpy poetess today but sharing some colour as my muse won't allow me to be anything except joyful. πŸ’– Thank you sweet friend.

          • orchidee

            A fine write Teddy πŸ™‚

            • Teddy.15

              Happy spring dear Orchi. 🌈

            • Fay Slimm.

              Burst away my sweet-hearted Teddy and get over that horrid Covid real soon - - love the blossomy tree above your impressive Senryu.

              • Teddy.15

                And you dear Fay bursting with best wishes for me, I hope to have some good news soon, it's been quite a ride, my home test says negative but the official one is still positive. Thank you so much for the warmth you have given me today I so appreciate it. πŸ’–

              • Christina8

                I think this is just as beautiful as the springtime that inspired it! wonderful!!

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you dear Christina, so humbled to have you here, spring is such a beautiful moment. πŸ’–

                • Neville

                  it only takes seventeen succulent syllables like those you strung together up there to make this old fella smile .......... a little gem for sure ........................... Neville πŸ’–

                  • Teddy.15

                    Awe, thank you dear Neville, always happy to be of service. Happy spring sweet friend. πŸ’–

                  • Arvy

                    Brings me joy to know you’re bursting with joy dear TeddyπŸ₯° reading this made me smile. Thank you🀍

                    • Teddy.15

                      Awe, thank you dear Arvy, just to know my scribbles can make another person smile just makes me feel joyous, thank you so much sweet friend. πŸ’–

                    • Bella Shepard

                      Dear Teddy, I can just see those exquisite colors oozing from your every pore. You dazzle me, truly!

                      • Teddy.15

                        Wow, thank you so much. I'm humbled beyond words dear Bella. πŸ’–

                      • Paul Bell

                        Colour is on the horizon, good times lie ahead. Okay, just entered the petrol forecourt, what the hell has happened. I see a bicycle on the horizon now. lol

                        • Teddy.15

                          It's a lie I'm bursting with pissed -offness and COVID, but you just cheered me up with your review lol I'll send you me four wheel skates if you want? LoL πŸ˜‚ thanks Paul always see the bright side with teddy bear 🐻 πŸ˜‚

                          • Paul Bell

                            Prefer blades myself, the police can't catch you on blades. lol

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                          • Goldfinch60

                            May that joy be forever with you Teddy.


                            • Teddy.15

                              Thank you dear Andy, sane to you. πŸ’– I hope things are going smoothly for you in these days. I'm slowly recovering. πŸ’–

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