Show me

Job Welime

Show me,

I need a back door,

For me to escape myself,

And for once just be real with you.

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  • L. B. Mek

    oh clever, aesthetic imagery
    of your Poetry, enhancing
    that mountain climb of escape
    your words, depict
    (read it from bottom line up)
    I would suggest
    layering the poem on top of itself
    so others can grasp it easier, like:
    'And for once just be real with you.
    For me to escape myself,
    I need a back door,
    Show me,
    Show me,
    I need a back door,
    For me to escape myself,
    And for once just be real with you.'
    ..
    (a great shorty!
    thanks for sharing, dear poet)

    • Job Welime

      Thanks dear poet, I want to try this short poems to see if they can come out as intense as I would like them to be.

    • Vamsi Sudha

      A different angle of your poetry. Loved it ....Job !!

      • Job Welime

        Thanks, Vamsi,, I\'m glad you liked it.

      • Crowns4Christ

        Different style than usual but I like it,a big statement for such few words

        • Job Welime

          Thanks dear poet



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