I wanna drink my kidney away

Ok Waleed


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I’ll be fine

wifey got another one
for me

  • Author: Ok Waleed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 30th, 2022 09:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: I’m talking bout the lean. Shout out to my wife though fr. Also shout out to www.priceofwisdom.art
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 16
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  • orchidee

    Not very sensible attitude to life., nor to others - expecting wife to give away one kidney to you.

    • Ok Waleed

      I hope you find this type of loyalty

      • orchidee

        No I don't. This would be OK as fiction. But why should your wife help you that much, if you are just wasting your kidney? What if she changed her mind? You would be in a terrible state. I'm being mild in comments here. I could be nasty about it.

        • Ok Waleed

          Because you assumed that it was a waste



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