Death is but a shadow
Of a love left behind
Haunting beats of souls
Dancing around in time
Reflecting in the waters
Where lights of love shine through
Reaching out to me
Reaching out for you
Grief is costly
Life is blind
Dreams are free
Not hard to find
Haunted souls
Dancing free
Shining bright
For you and me.
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Goodbyes are always tough, but your lines make a soothing reading. I'm sure they'll be appreciated.
Much appreciated. My words are my way of expressing the way life is, every part of life including the inevitable, death is beautiful chapter that needs beautiful words to discribe the different emotions it creates when we are touched by it,
wonderfully conceptualised
and then written, so well
if someone
wanted to base their philosophy
on life, based on these words
I wouldn't be surprised
clearly, your poetic Genius
swims, at that deep end
of yearning, for existence's
meaning...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
Your comment has amazed me. I\'m more than flattered by your words. You have cemented the work I do by showing that you have an excellent understanding of my verses. Thank you so much for your kind words, I feel I evolve everytime I share my poems, and to have them appreciated is more than I can ask for, again thank you, I\'m so glad you emersed yourself within the rhythm and flow of this poem X
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