Someone told me, if I
place a Rose
in some bubbly Champagne
its beauty: would remain
undisturbed, by the passing
of Time
behold, my love
this bath I have prepared
please, enjoy - take your
Time
just don’t be tempted
to sip, while you dip…
© L. B. Mek
November 2021
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Don't touch the champagne or your sins will destroy you. I'm thinking she didn't listen and is now drowning in the bath. Some just don't listen.
well, you say drowning
but those bubbles, spell out
that intoxicating tipsy
in a Rose's, whimsy..
lol
thank you, dear poet
And such perfume, enriched by the bringing together of two fine vintages of beauty no doubt.
no doubt, wise poet
love your use/placement of 'enriched'
in your comment..
thank you!
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem LB Mek, it was tantalizing!
tongue, titillating - even?
the mere thought of Champaign bubbles
will do that to you..
lol
thank you, dear poet
just glad you enjoyed the read
I love the wit and playfulness of your poem, just wish someone had told me about the benefits of bathing in champagne 50 years ago.
Ha!
that's one refined wit, you wield
with such ease, dear poet
thank you!
A wonderful Metaphor or should I say allegory. My mind revolves around the image of what follows the sipping. A very nice piece though.
yeah, an open ended scene
is much more appealing
let your imaginations, script
what happy-ever-after
you choose to believe - in..
thank you!
for such a lovely comment, dear poet
Wow. I want to soak in the bubbly fun!
well, erm
I was kinda going for metaphor
in reality, it might cost a little
probably better to go for a milk bath
(skimmed milk, mind you
whole milk is kinda pricy) lol
thank you for joining in the fun, dear poet
enjoyed to the hilt my friend and then a bit .................................. Neville 🙂
right? a fun concept
trust you to identify its quirky heights
my cherished friend, thank you!
A frisky refreshment. This one has coaxed me to have a teeny sip of that bubbly joy for the very first time. 🤭
you may be merely joking
but I'm currently scrounging
the back of my sofa
for that loose change, treasure..
gonna have to make this
a bubbly weekend
for we need a little, tipsy
in our lives
to put up with our beloved London's
weather tantrums..
'April showers', indeed!
(Thank you, I read your 'frisky refreshment'
and that just sparked my poetic imagination)
lol
Lol. I see you are already in the weekend before the weekend, so why put in on the weather tantrums! ; )
That was a Love Tact 🙂
Dear Mek, your poem already left me intoxicated, what would have been with the lady, not going further to spare your blushes..
Romantic feel Hidden between the lines. Great One as usual !!
ahhhh, what a romantic comment
love how you kept it playful
thank you! dear Poet
What’s the fun in that? 🍾🥴
lol
yeah..
maybe getting tipsy
from your champagne, bath water
is perfectly fine
will have to rethink that last line..
thanks for joining in the fun
dear Poet 🥂
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