If you read your story from a stranger
Would you contemplate and would it engage
Does music flow,or try to rearrange
your songbook,poignant notes upon the page
Within this chaptered past,from anothers view
Do you see what you want to recognize
or deny this person is even you
Character percieved behind unlike eyes
Emerging birth,awakened genesis
Developing mounting traits day by day
Read between the lines,find your nemesis
Listen to this menacious foe I say
Then put this book upon your mental shelve
Begin to write a volume two yourself
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Author:
dean langmuir (
Offline) - Published: April 6th, 2022 05:23
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Comments4
I just got a book of Shakespeare's sonnets from the library, I had never read one before. I am beginning to understand the framework and flow and I love what you have written. We truly can be very different people, depending on the point of view.
Thank you Bella for the reply,a sonnet is quite an exercise to compose and try to covey something,I wasn't sure if even made any sense,you got what I was getting at,take care
beautifully penned
aren't we all a Pandora's box
enjoyed
Dahlia
Thank you Dahlia and yes we are,take care
Good write Dean.
Thank you O,bit of a challenge keeping meter,take care
Very nice! Interesting, uplifting and unique! Thank you!
Thanks for reading,sonnets are an interesting format.
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