The Ghost of Donna Lou
In the early morning fog
just bypassing the tunnel
the click click of stiletto’s
long pale legs barely covered
in a red backless mini dress
her slender silhouette vanishes
gossip in the neighborhood
says she’s trying to get home
the ghost of Donna Lou
never finds its way back
her cheap perfume lingers
at crossroads with her killer
she was a young prostitute
on the streets of New York
Voices of Ghosts
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Wow,ever investigated goldfield hotel in goldfield,NV.
I actually seen an apparition in a fourth floor window
Thank you for reading my work. you are truly about the only one that reads and comments, I am thankful for that, also thank you for the tip on
goldfield hotel
Voices of Ghosts
On ghost adventures with Zack baggers, they investigated it and got alot of activity,and that was after I seen a woman's apparition
I like your intriguing concept
giving 'Voice'
to society's, marginalised 'Ghosts'..
a wonderful example of poetry's, utility
beyond its usual
artistry, or self-expression
scope for subject matter..
this is my first time reading your work, I think
so I need to ask, if your characters
are sourced from events in reality
or completely, 'empathetically'
fictional
(thanks for sharing)
Thank you for reading
I'm a parapsychology/paranormal investigator my stories are based on our own investigations.
descriptively eerie I personally haven't experience ghosts but I don't doubt either...enjoyed...Dahlia
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