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  Bella Shepard April 7th, 2022 09:27

  In this age, the beauty of silence seems to be lost in the pollution of noise. We don't seem to understand that it is a natural condition, and we should nurture it for our own well mental being. You have captured this so well, a lovely poem that is taken to heart.

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    dean langmuirApril 7th, 2022 10:54

    Thank you Bella,so true.take care,silent on.

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  Dahlia April 7th, 2022 13:14

  this flows beautifully, enjoyed
  Dahlia

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    dean langmuirApril 7th, 2022 14:16

    Thanks Dalhia,I call it a right angle acrostic,of course I made that up,take care

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  Crowns4Christ April 7th, 2022 15:43

  Interesting, I like this

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    dean langmuirApril 7th, 2022 16:14

    Thanks blue,a little play,take care

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  Caring dove April 8th, 2022 13:05

  We can always try to fill emptiness .. I like how you have expressed yourself in this .. a really nice writing )

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    dean langmuirApril 8th, 2022 13:31

    Thanks Violet for reading,I tried adifferent format,it was fun.

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  Annemarie April 9th, 2022 19:26

  This is so creative and such an important message! Brilliant!

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    dean langmuirApril 10th, 2022 04:22

    Thank you,take care.

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  arqios May 11th, 2022 07:16

  An excellent and clever poem! One worth emulating, at some stage. Almost Sator squarish in design. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

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    dean langmuirMay 11th, 2022 07:44

    Thank you Rik for reading I had to look up sator and I suppose the poem is like that,I was just seeing if I could write something in a strange format,take care,poet on

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    arqiosMay 11th, 2022 10:04

    And you have successfully written a poem of such features. It is quite difficult to get meaning and beauty on such types without forcing language. So an overall achievement by such merits. Poet on, indeed!