For every second
the chronometer gains,
the future loses two
The light retreating
time in halves
—the moment old once new
(Dreamsleep: April, 2022)
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Author:
Kurt Philip Behm (
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Dear Kurt,
You are super at penning *compendious and powerful writings.
āHalf Lifeā is a perfect example.
I suppose weāre not the only ones agingā¦so is time.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
P.S.ā *compendious is one of my favorite words I learned when I was learning the English language. I thought it was appropriate to use it in my comment to your poem.
Great word, thanks so much.
Good Morning, my dear Poet āļø ā¦
ā¦and youāre most welcome.š¤
'the future loses two'
that's the problem
with the infinity in humanity's
incomprehension..
every factoid, is a thought away
from its future, as debunked theory
and so
our future, is an endless
Autumn, of assumption leaves
decaying
in the gaze, of belated realisation's
progress...
(just such a thought provoking write, Kurt
I couldn't help but try and scribble
a little poetic reply..
thank you!)
Great commenting as usual.
Thanks LB.
Kurt
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