At my darkest, I almost gave up
I had nobody to lean on
I did not believe in myself nor the Almighty
I kept questioning about life
Everything sucked
Can I survive? I asked
I woke up on another day
Breathing the oxygen
Thankfully, God is so good all the time
He gave me another chance and showed me the way
I used to doubt
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Good for you!!! the angels REJOICE with every new believer, God is great
Thank you so much
'God is so good all the time'
'At my darkest, I almost gave up'
these lines, contradict
themselves...
(oh and btw
exactly, which 'God' is that?
Thanatos, Hel, Osiris
or
that same, shared God
of the Jews, Christians and Muslims?)
try to be more than just another herd member, walking
blind
shouting 'God is great'
and showcasing
that religious, egotistical elitism
by assuming your God
is the Only, God
then smiling
at your friends and work colleagues
with their differing, ideal's..
that's for the weak willed
Ignorant
you dear poet, demonstrate
enough insight in your poetry
so Please
have faith! in your chosen God
think through
your Dogma's hate fuelling, veils
see the God
that you can Question
and still, Believe in...!
personally, I think
the term
'God is Kind!'
has more merit
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and He forgives. He is good all the time
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