Don't know if you were shy
or you were terribly upset,
I kept waiting for you endlessly
where we could've met.
Kept waiting being wishful
realising at that time in a blink,
that you won't turn around
that makes my heart sink.
I am still hanging around
with your sweet thoughts,
my heart keeps bleeding quietly
I've entangled myself in knots.
And then I began to ponder
why such a feeling, that bears,
heart and mind have fallen apart
meaning nothing to me but tears.
Still not wise, I often turn around
still looking, you might be there,
watching the path quite often
knowing well, you are nowhere.
Entangled in thoughts haywire,
mind is still stuck unto thee,
I feel you are around me
and I see thee wherever I see.
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Knowing well you are nowhere around, I still see thee wherever I see. Sometimes something is beyond the understanding of conscious mind, beyond the transactions.... just a unique feeling.
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
Thank you! I don't consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
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