At 11:05 the torrent came,
its current tainted,
its waters shamed
At 11:06 direction changed,
intention drowning
—redemption stained
(Dreamsleep: April, 2022)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: April 9th, 2022 10:42
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
Comments3
Dear Kurt,
Your ‘Dreamsleep’ is powerful. It poignantly states how a sudden attack can change certain circumstances in a flash.
I love how you’ve encapsulated your message.
Laura🌻
Thanks Laura.
You’re most welcome, my dear Poet.
Happy Palm Sunday.
Wonderful, Kurt
Thanks Draven.
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