An empty room,
bags packed.
Silence.
A moment to herself, sitting in a familiar chair,
that was never hers and will never be.
Her former beloved, whom she will always hold dear.
The end, although necessary and expected, is bittersweet.
She sheds tears thinking of what could have been.
They embrace for a final time,
to say goodbye
and now they are free.
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Author:
Draven (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My boyfriend of 2 years and I broke up in January and I finally moved out of his flat last week. It hurts even though it was mutual but it was time.
- Category: Forgiveness
- Views: 25
- User favorite of this poem: Eugene S..
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Comments7
Oh Draven - endings are always that bit sad - I know how it feels to sit for a moment in tears thinking what could have been. A moving read. in all sorts of ways.
Thank you, Fay x
an emotive read but handled perfectly with respect, may you move on to a next chapter remembering all the good times!
Thank you so much ♡
Yes, a moving read, as you move out!
Haha yes! Thanks Orchi
You may never know what a blessing in disguise breakups can be till the next person comes along and is your knight in shining armor. Good wishes to you!
Thank you!
Wishing you all the very best for the future. Sad lines, written beautifully.
Thank you xx
although this is sadder than sad, you must of course move on ... and anyway, it means I'm still in with a chance ...... maybe ... N x
Haha x
The emotions spoke so beautifully in this poem and the few words translate all of those emotions so vividly.
Thank you, Eugene.
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