-run or stay-

dean langmuir

I don't listen

to your words

I look thru

to see your intent

A good vibe

I will stay,I will chat


You are who you are

your dictions depict it

But your values

speak louder than words

A bad vibe

I'll say Hi,then I'll scat


Do people run away

from you

Or do they stay

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 12th, 2022 05:52
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 29


  • Neville

    very often they are gone before I can ask the


    • dean langmuir

      Good one N thanks for reading.take care

    • dean langmuir

      Hi Teddy,I try not think bad of anyone also,but I have a couple times in life where every sense in my body said say Hi then move on,most people stay when they meet me.you have a good day.

    • Pearcemelville 兎敏

      simple and shared by all
      making your poem effective
      With some there is
      a good vibe but

      • dean langmuir

        Thanks for reply,take care.

      • Rozina

        Some do some don't I guess. Nice lines indeed.

        • dean langmuir

          Thanks for the reply R,you take care.

        • spilleronsheet

          Well worded dear Poet
          Many a times I may stay
          But few runaway
          Abandon I lay with my own chaotic thoughts in trail….

          • dean langmuir

            Thank You S,chaotic thoughts are right.take care.

          • dean langmuir

            Thank you S,chaotic thoughts is right,you take care.

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