I've had this water in my eye for an hour.
But I guess it's just some pollen from a flower.
I'm feeling better though sitting clothed in the shower.
My heart has been feeling tight.
But I guess I just need an early night.
I'm feeling much better now that I've turned off the light.
My body feels battered and beaten.
But I guess it's just something bad I've eaten.
It just feels better using the floorboards as seating.
I keep looking around like there's something I've lost.
But I'm looking so much I fear for the cost.
But I guess it's just some pollen from a flower.
I'm feeling better though sitting clothed in the shower.
My heart has been feeling tight.
But I guess I just need an early night.
I'm feeling much better now that I've turned off the light.
My body feels battered and beaten.
But I guess it's just something bad I've eaten.
It just feels better using the floorboards as seating.
I keep looking around like there's something I've lost.
But I'm looking so much I fear for the cost.
Even the sunlight feels just like frost.
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Author:
Daves Bloke Poems (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A short love poem about the feelings of breaking up with someone or losing somebody. Without fully understanding all of the emotions you are experiencing at the time and trying to ignore them without dealing with your true emotions.
- Category: Love
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Comments1
In just a few lines you've explained how some people deal with this. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Thank you. I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed it 🙂
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