In this river of emotions
rushing in its full spate,
I just flow along the inspiration
feeling trivial to debate.
When I hail you from far
for love is a primal call,
you feel I overstep my mandate
and that may lead to a brawl.
Let's break that glass ceiling
and we must aim a little high,
the sky is limitless for all
together we just need to fly.
You're beautiful and life is long
don't let it slip by, feel the song,
you are a bird, you know how to fly
you'd be glorious to touch the sky.
Your spirits are high
and fate is on your side,
just forget the worries
and remember the pride.
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes we feel we must and often take things in our control but sometimes it is better to let go and it is difficult to loose this control. The poet is trying to express such helpless situation in the river of emotions and he still motivated his love to exercise her existance and not give up on life.
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Comments2
a searching write
touching on intriguing themes..
thanks for sharing
Thank You !
beautiful & deep
great work poet
enjoyed
Dahlia
Thank You !
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