Spring waves arrived this morn.
I burned a fried egg
when I was rushing in the spring light.
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Author:
Moyu Aoki (
Offline) - Published: April 15th, 2022 05:04
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Spring waves arrived this morn.
I burned a fried egg
when I was rushing in the spring light.
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Comments1
I like how you started with nature, then abruptly inserted yourself into the poem, and finally tied it all together. Very playful.
Thanks for reading. I'm very glad.
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