a love note to the sea

Dahlia

 

 

a love note to the sea

~~ what i love about you

are the salt sultry kisses

the hypnotic blue bliss

a mystery endlessly pursued ~~

Dahlia

  • Author: Dahlia (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 15th, 2022 18:16
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 43
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  • Crowns4Christ

    Short, sweet and beautiful, keep writing Dahlia, you're very talented

    • Dahlia

      Thank you, you are very kind to me and know that I think the same of you!
      🤗💖

      • Crowns4Christ

        Thank you so much, I appreciate that, I feel that Christ's love shines through us and our poetry, its the most intimate and vulnerable moment for me is when I'm writing poetry, I only write from my heart

      • Cassia DeSousa

        Hello Dahlia
        This is so lovely, the sea is one of my favorite places...tchau...Cassia

        • Dahlia

          Thank you so much!
          🙂

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Sea an endless mystery..Good one poet !!

          • Dahlia

            Thank you so much!
            🙂

          • DestinysPerspectives

            I love how short yet descriptive this is! It makes me feel as if I am just drifting through the sea in a zen state of mind. I admire your skill with this poem.

            • Dahlia

              Thank you so much, for your kind feedback, made me happy 🙂

            • sorenbarrett

              I too love the :hypnotic blue bliss" it is no mistake that most people's favorite color is blue. I loved the line "a mystery endlessly pursued"

              • Dahlia

                Thank you so much!🙂✌

              • Paul Bell

                Funny how the sea has that magnetic magic for humans, it must have been our home at some point.



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