a love note to the sea
~~ what i love about you
are the salt sultry kisses
the hypnotic blue bliss
a mystery endlessly pursued ~~
Dahlia
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Dahlia (
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- Category: Nature
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Short, sweet and beautiful, keep writing Dahlia, you're very talented
Thank you, you are very kind to me and know that I think the same of you!
🤗💖
Thank you so much, I appreciate that, I feel that Christ's love shines through us and our poetry, its the most intimate and vulnerable moment for me is when I'm writing poetry, I only write from my heart
Hello Dahlia
This is so lovely, the sea is one of my favorite places...tchau...Cassia
Thank you so much!
🙂
Sea an endless mystery..Good one poet !!
Thank you so much!
🙂
I love how short yet descriptive this is! It makes me feel as if I am just drifting through the sea in a zen state of mind. I admire your skill with this poem.
Thank you so much, for your kind feedback, made me happy 🙂
I too love the :hypnotic blue bliss" it is no mistake that most people's favorite color is blue. I loved the line "a mystery endlessly pursued"
Thank you so much!🙂✌
Funny how the sea has that magnetic magic for humans, it must have been our home at some point.
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