Teddy.15

Algebra of Love

 
 
Often,
I sit and ask myself
 
Just why is it
That two beautiful people 
 
Who give everything 
And more to love...
 
Rarely, ever find eachother? 
 



 
 
 
 


 
 


 

Comments9

  • orchidee

    We found each other - what more can we want?! heehee.
    Doh! His heart is on the wrong side, if it's bleeding for her, or heart-broken.
    But really, the heart is central, slightly to the left, but not completely. Here ends First Aid note remembered!

    • Teddy.15

      lol ere this is serious stuff orchi

      lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣 💖

      • orchidee

        How's the teef been lately?! 🙂

      • 2 more comments

      • Paul Bell

        I suppose the answer is in the mathematical formula somewhere, but as you know with maths, the formula is never ending.

        • Teddy.15

          Indeed into infinity dear Paul, also maybe in one moment and maybe never. I've maybe truly seen one couple who absolutely were in love the exact same amount. Maybe it truly does come with time but then who truly has time to wait. lol oh dear there I go again. 🤣 Thank you so much dear friend. 💖

          • Paul Bell

            I like the alcohol formula. Pi eyed squared.

          • dusk arising

            What a wonderful yet perplexing thought. Maybe it is because they live such peaceful loving lives having found an inner contentment in their own company. Just a thought but i really like your post today a lot.
            So its going into my fav's.

            • Teddy.15

              The way I see it is most of us who are lucky enough to find love or we are the ones who give too little or the ones who give too much making an actually one sided love. It's just my take on this subject and what I have experienced in my lifetime I really love your thoughts dear Dusky much more pleasant than mine, I'm always humbled when you enjoy my work so much. Thank you dear friend 💖

            • L. B. Mek

              if my biography, was a song
              it would be:
              'lovers without love'
              by Joshua James..
              and you, my dear Poetess
              have squeezed that songs
              core essence
              into this subtly, monumental
              acute, depiction
              of bewildering reality
              where outstretched, fingertips
              brush past each other
              shoulder to bumped shoulder, everyday
              and yet, never noticing
              each other's needy, presence
              blinded
              by our misconceptions
              to what we want, out of life
              or those partner's, for our lives
              we delude ourselves into thinking
              they must first, be a perfect fit
              and tick every aesthetic
              in our oppressive, wish list's..
              (such a great shorty, worded impactful
              to say the least)
              thank you!

              • Teddy.15

                I believe within this wonderful review.you have your own beautiful poem dear Mek, as I'm also so full of pride when you enjoy my work so very much. Thank you dear friend. 💖

              • Accidental Poet

                My Dear Teddy, this is exactly WHY we continue to search for it. Those who give up on love, give up on themselves, no? 🤔

                • Teddy.15

                  Yes, what a wonderful statement my dear A.P, thank you my dear friend. Love that you saw this 🤣

                  • Accidental Poet

                    Once a romantic, always a romantic, I say. 😍

                  • spilleronsheet

                    Few words caught the essence of life
                    The departure it seems
                    That gaps may form yet we are convinced there are no distance apart
                    Very intriguing dear Teddy

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you my dear Spills. 💖

                    • Rozina

                      Too many permutations and combinations possible in life and love. Super poem Teddy.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you Dearest Rozina 💖

                      • Goldfinch60

                        It happens more often than you think Teddy, love has certainly happened to me once more.

                        Andy

                        • Teddy.15

                          Yes dear Andy and all the best to you both dear friend. 💖 Thank you.💖

                        • Neville



                          Now ya got this old geezer guessing ..
                          bravo Teddy .. an impressive bit o penning .......................... Neville 💖

                          • Teddy.15

                            Thank you dear Neville. 💖



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