Look, I promised to never tell you any lies.
So you should know I just undressed you with my eyes.
Holding you up with my torso between your thighs.
Frantically removing cotton and lace.
Wanton limbs in lustful embrace.
Every contour of skin I trace.
Our muscles tense, then relax.
Into a crescendo of symphonic climax.
But from the look on your face, I guess I was too liberal with the facts.
- Author: Daves Bloke Poems ( Offline)
- Published: April 18th, 2022 19:31
- Comment from author about the poem: A simple and romantic but hopefully mirthful erotic poem.
- Category: Erotic
- Views: 21
Comments3
Yep you achieved erotic, and trust really is the secret to a healthy marriage, whether good or bad, honesty is always best
simple, romantic, hopeful, mirthful
(why do I think, there's a cocktail mix
that can blossom form this jarring words)
lol
thanks for sharing, such emphatically worded poetry
A really great poem, it was a joy to read!
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