Nicely expressed human nature. I guess us poets are an emotional bunch and have known the pain of broken love. Quite natural to be reticent around the area of forming another close relationship. Self preservation.
(your impactful shorty, inspired
these words
of a wannabe poetic reply from me
thank you, dear poet
for always keeping it real)
'they try and split, knowledge
between learnt behaviour
and innate..
while I simply pulse, consequence
in eardrums, that flinch
at approaching fingertips
be they ghostly or real
for somewhere deep within
that part of me, arriving
squealing, furious
from first breath, knows
there is crimson heat
in every fingertip
and yet.. another part of me
remains - frozen
in fear of making connections
that scold, like reality's
far, too - real..'
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There's nothing wrong with that my friend, sometimes we all need to take a time out and breathe then our creativeness returns to us
Thanks b.o. cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
Yes, we don't tell everyone all of our heart. In some cases we don't even know the guy or gal much, when they may ask 'How are you?'
So true orchi,so very true.Cheers 🥂🌹🕊🌞
Nicely expressed human nature. I guess us poets are an emotional bunch and have known the pain of broken love. Quite natural to be reticent around the area of forming another close relationship. Self preservation.
Self preservation yes,but I’ve got to let that fear go. I can’t let it rule me. Thanks dusk. Cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
(your impactful shorty, inspired
these words
of a wannabe poetic reply from me
thank you, dear poet
for always keeping it real)
'they try and split, knowledge
between learnt behaviour
and innate..
while I simply pulse, consequence
in eardrums, that flinch
at approaching fingertips
be they ghostly or real
for somewhere deep within
that part of me, arriving
squealing, furious
from first breath, knows
there is crimson heat
in every fingertip
and yet.. another part of me
remains - frozen
in fear of making connections
that scold, like reality's
far, too - real..'
Than you for your words of wisdom L.B. Cheers🥂🌹🕊🌞
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