July

anabasova

Theoretically just poetry
I'm gonna faint in reality
Heart too much to handle it
Mind too faint to picture it
Storm in July, I wasn't ran by
Can I run some more or stop now
Should I look around and wish I was blind
And this silence is one way to drown
The blood of my pain on your hands
The weight of my fate on my back
Far away to hold my hand
It doesn't matter if I want to
It doesn't work that way.

  • Author: anabasova (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 21st, 2022 19:57
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • L. B. Mek

    there is promise in our disquiet
    allows us to ponder, chaos' whisper
    and there is, chance
    in our dispirited, frame of mind
    for in lethargy's stillness
    we may be granted, some awareness
    we need only, separate
    our two burdens, keep one
    to grow stronger beneath
    and allow ourselves to heal from the other
    as soon, as we can:
    'The blood of my pain on your hands
    The weight of my fate on my back'..
    (forgive me
    I couldn't help but try and poetically
    respond, to your somewhat abstract
    yet, immeasurably relatable poem..
    what a great read!
    thanks for sharing, dear poet)



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