Rose of Romance

Kevin Michael Bloor

I’d waited and wandered,
and time I had squandered
in search of my bonnie, wee lass.

Through seasons of sorrows
and tragic tomorrows
my missing her just wouldn’t pass.

I felt it worth waiting,
with breath held and bating
for girl with a face, oh, so fair.

For she was my first love,
my one only true love,
my rose of romance, oh, so rare!

 

  • Author: Blue-eyed Bolla (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2022 02:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: For my bonnie wee lass, Lorraine
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 25
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, L. B. Mek.
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Comments5

  • Laura🌻

    Dear Kevin,

    I love your poem(s) dedicated to your
    ‘bonnie wee lass, Lorraine’.
    It has been worthwhile and a blessing for you to wait and finally be with your first love.❤️

    Perhaps love does conquer all.
    Have a super day with your goddess.

    Laura🌻

  • Rozina

    Lovely poem.

  • Saxon Crow

    Beautiful wee poem Kev. You're a lucky man

  • L. B. Mek

    I think Burns, himself
    would cherish the worded devotion
    in this poem
    what a fantastic, song
    to serenade your Lorraine with..
    and I can't help, comparing your lines
    favourably to his
    in that triumphant, 'red red rose':
    'So fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
    So deep in luve am I;
    And I will luve thee still, my dear,
    Till a’ the seas gang dry.

    Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
    And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
    I will love thee still, my dear,
    While the sands o’ life shall run.'
    (may your life's cups
    be ever filled with each others, kindness
    stay blessed, dear poet)

    • Kevin Michael Bloor

      Thanks LB. Yeah, I love that poem by Burns. Maybe, unconsciuosly, it was my inspiration. Again, many thanks for your support.

    • Christina8

      This poem is stellar and I LOVE your rhyme scheme! What a grand tribute to your love and I hope she adores it! Just wonderful!

      • Kevin Michael Bloor

        Thank you, Christina. I think the secret is letting your rhymes flow naturally, without forcing them to fit. Again, thank you for your continued support.



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