here, budding petals
hope fuelled syllables, as my
heart’s, pulsing brooklets
© L. B. Mek
March 2022
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A beautiful tribute to growing buds dear friend. and such a thrilling bouquet of Spring-like imagery to brighten my day - -at this moment pink graces my garden and heart too.
that's so beautifully worded, 'pink, graces'
I wish you all the Pink in the world, dear Fay
hope you have a peaceful, Spring and Summer..
thank you!
I must be the only guy who gets excited when the grass seed comes through. Now I need a lawnmower.
if DIY tool shopping was an endurance sport
I would have an Olympic medal or two, by now..
let's go get dem weeds! lol
thank you, dear Poet
Another lovely spring tribute. I've been enjoying several spring poems today so even though there is no spring here I am enjoying the imagery.
may I ask, why there is no Spring?
glad you enjoyed the read, dear poet
thank you!
I live in the tropics, Malaysia. There are no 4 seasons here; hot, humid, rainy, hot......
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A beautiful senryu, celebrating the nature’s beautiful attire…great one dear Mek….
thank you, dear Poet
I thought if I shared any more
lengthy scribbles
I might be barred from MPS..
lol
No, I don’t think so….your a pro…its a pleasure to read your poetry….and a senryu/haiku is so difficult to compose…it’s commendable that you can master both long and short…
A hopeful write here and it's a beauty with spring imagery to boot! Thanks Mek for sharing!
glad you enjoyed the read, dear poet
thank you!
Dear Mek, Nice one. But I feel a Haiku or Senryu limits the poets expression, In special for a person like you. Feels incomplete and want to read more of it..
" Your expressions are your heart beats.,
Which we really savor like a sweetmeats !! 🙂
an insightful, point of view
but may I ask
imagine if you could ink every expression
of every heart beat, where will it end...?
now, try to conceptualise
you have the power to condense and distil
a billion heartbeats, worth of emoted expression
in just 17 syllables?
How much more of your expressions
will you able to share..
it would be like sweetmeats
not making you gain weight or diabetes...!
be open minded, dear Poet
length doesn't equate to worth, in Poetry
but then again, like you
I do like it when there's more meat
on a Poem, for me to sink my
opinionated, teeth - in..
lol
thank you! for your wonderfully brave comment
stay bold!
Thanks Mek, for taking time to write out !! This was so hilarious..
"it would be like sweetmeats
not making you gain weight or diabetes...!"..
Yes, I am very open minded about poetry and would surely try to take Haiku as a diabetic pill...hahahaha
Liked the way you presented your reply....poetry can't escape you ....:)
If I could write only one of these ever again, it would be to write this one, but before thee, brother Mek .. top most marks subsequently assigned .. N
ah Hyung, your gracious score markings
nourish, my poetic heart..
I will strive for your coat tails, you
just keep leading me to poetry's, clouds...
thank you!
That it does each time I drag myself out the door in the morning, to receive what you describe beyond my mind....
Short and sweet too!
Fantastic as ever
thank you! 'my man'
'to receive what you describe beyond my mind'..
your wording is so succinctly, elegant
as-ever, simply beautiful to read
Yes, that fountain that just bursts from the heart. Wonderful!
right?! it always felt like that to me..
thank you! dear poet
beautiful!
humbled!
thank you, dear poet
The "hope" of Spring expressed nicely in this short poem. From "budding petals" to "pulsing brooklets" picturesque words straight from the heart. Good one. - Phil A.
thank you! dear poet
and yes, I agree
'picturesque' imagery, is my go-to
when voicing those softer notes
of emotion anchored, subjects
Fine written words Mek
Bringing joy to all of us
In just those three lines.
Andy
thank you, Andy
just trying to utilise
the lessons, I heed
from your pen's
endlessly hope fuelling, poetry
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