Don't be afraid
Be fearless
Three hundred voices
Bringing joy in the sky
Love what you do
Little darling
Dance all night
Shining fearless and bright
Roses are red
Spreading love
Today,
Is a great day!
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Author:
Sophenia (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This isn't really a poem. It's actually a song I wrote. I was inspired by a Ted Talk about writing a song. In the Ted Talk they used random sentences to write the lyrics of the song, so that's what I did. Maybe it sounds a little weird without knowing the rhythm, but I still wanted to share the lyrics. I think it's kind of funny and there are still some messages hidden in this poem. I am curious to know what you think about it ;)
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Comments2
It inspired me
to try out, the very Ted exercise
that inspired you, only
using your beautiful Poem, as my source...
how about this, pitiful effort
dear Poet:
('Today,
Is a great day!
Love what you do
Three hundred voices
Bringing joy in the sky
Don't be afraid
Little darling
Dance all night
Roses are red
Shining fearless and bright
Spreading love
Be fearless'...)
Please
forgive me, I meant no disrespect
by rearranging
your beautiful work..
thank you! for sharing your song
and gifting me, that inspiration
to try something
so brazenly and egotistically
creative..
I appreciate your courage very much!! It's so meaningful to me that my work inspired you! Keep being brazenly and egotistically creative dear poet!
So as someone with panic disorder, this poem title was screaming out for me to read."Don't be afraid Be fearless" are words to live by. Its a beautiful song. Whether sunny or dreary every day ought to be a great day, right? Great job dear poet!!
I hope you're doing okay. Panic disorders can make you feel very uncomfortable and afraid. I send you so much love and hope you are having a fearless day dear poet! Thank you for being here
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