Gently carrying Blossoms
From fruit trees plucked
Around her a dust-devil swirled
As she braced the crisp
Morning air.
She was an old wife
Not mine.
Silently she went her way
Me another.
In the moment
Some love was found.
- Author: Jerry Reynolds ( Offline)
- Published: April 27th, 2022 10:11
- Category: Love
- Views: 39
Comments8
Good write Jerry.
Thanks, Orchi.
You pen the scene with finesse as love of some sort comes out of the dust - a fine write Jerry
Thanks, Fay.
I dearly love a poetic moment.
I like this, it has mischief.
Thanks, Dusk.
Dust-Devils are a mischief. They are harmless little tornadoes that show up out of nowhere but strong enough to b;ow your skirt up.
A subtle little piece of genius.
Thanks, S.C.
So much in a so few lines. Beautiful.
Thanks, Zoia.
First time I heard of this word. So your poem makes great sense and I see the scene you wrote about so vividly. Lovely.
Thanks, Rozina.
Dust-Devils are small harmless tornadoes.
every once in a while, I stumble upon a little written gem .. just now, is such an occasion sir Jez ............... Neville 🙂
Thank you, my friend,
Nice image that you have created. I'm a newbie here around your age and love is often my theme too.
Thanks, Hzugman.
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