Dust Devil

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  orchidee April 27th, 2022 11:43

  Good write Jerry.

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    Jerry ReynoldsApril 27th, 2022 17:14

    Thanks, Orchi.

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  Fay Slimm. April 27th, 2022 11:50

  You pen the scene with finesse as love of some sort comes out of the dust - a fine write Jerry

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    Jerry ReynoldsApril 27th, 2022 17:17

    Thanks, Fay.
    I dearly love a poetic moment.

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  dusk arising April 27th, 2022 12:45

  I like this, it has mischief.

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    Jerry ReynoldsApril 27th, 2022 17:20

    Thanks, Dusk.
    Dust-Devils are a mischief. They are harmless little tornadoes that show up out of nowhere but strong enough to b;ow your skirt up.

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  Saxon Crow April 27th, 2022 13:23

  A subtle little piece of genius.

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    Jerry ReynoldsApril 27th, 2022 17:20

    Thanks, S.C.

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  Zoia Siena April 27th, 2022 15:47

  So much in a so few lines. Beautiful.

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    Jerry ReynoldsApril 27th, 2022 17:22

    Thanks, Zoia.

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  Rozina April 27th, 2022 17:39

  First time I heard of this word. So your poem makes great sense and I see the scene you wrote about so vividly. Lovely.

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    Jerry ReynoldsApril 28th, 2022 09:09

    Thanks, Rozina.
    Dust-Devils are small harmless tornadoes.

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  Neville May 8th, 2022 02:41

  
  every once in a while, I stumble upon a little written gem .. just now, is such an occasion sir Jez ............... Neville 🙂

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 8th, 2022 08:19

    Thank you, my friend,

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  hzugman May 8th, 2022 17:24

  Nice image that you have created. I'm a newbie here around your age and love is often my theme too.

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    Jerry ReynoldsMay 9th, 2022 15:50

    Thanks, Hzugman.