When your pent face faces the ball
The love in my eyes burns bright
The focus. The determination. The passion.
All of which totals the sum of your character
A body like a vase
Sprung flowers of perfect glory
A-crown the bejeweled majesty of your glow
Shoes too big to fill
The calm demeanor of amassed grandiosity
Worn like the finest tapestry of Chinese silk
The humble bee of the liveliest hive
For to me, to get stung, to disrupt.
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Author:
JHenderson (
Offline) - Published: May 4th, 2022 18:09
- Category: Letter
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Comments1
really like your poetic ambition
and liberal use
of such vividly original imagery..
but I fear the overall theme
was lost on me..
but that's more to do
with my limitations
than your artistry..
(although I must ask
what is a 'pent face'?)
lol
thanks for sharing
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