Are you sure these floorboards are secure?
And are you not worried about the rusty lock on the door?
Come see this crack in the wall.
Are you not worried the bricks might fall?
The electrics look faulty and the ceiling has mould.
And that bed looks awfully old.
What if it breaks and I fall out of bed?
Suffering a concussion to my head!
And this window it looks like the pane might fall out.
I'll fall to my death I have no doubt!
That chair looks like the leg might break.
Let's stop somewhere else for goodness sake!
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Author:
Daves Bloke Poems (
Offline) - Published: May 5th, 2022 16:39
- Comment from author about the poem: A poem about unsuitable accommodation and a very paranoid person.
- Category: Humor
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Comments1
''if you've got the coin
we can flip, for it..''
lol
(a fun read, although
as my little reply, alluded to
sadly, most times
people stay in those premises
for seemingly
having no other place, to stay..)
thanks for sharing
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