Once I tried to imagine a person,
that could be better than you.
The wasteful effort of this vain attempt
just got me thinking more about you.
Though it's a dreaded cold winter
with winds unfavourable to me.
It won't remain this way forever,
a spring sunrise, I hope to see.
Cold winds are sweeping clouds
across the deep blue winter sky.
I wait for the ice to thaw
and the weather to be warm and dry.
I won't ever be angry
and I won't ever be sad.
I will seek adventures
and I will be more glad.
Who knew for a moment of joy,
a lifetime would perish.
Every moment of missing you
is a moment to cherish.
- Author: Max (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 12th, 2022 00:51
- Category: Love
- Views: 21
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Cassia DeSousa
Comments5
personally, I don't believe
in absolutism, dear Poet..
I heed the wise words
taken from a 'Hollywood' movie
profiteering, by stealing and warping
the culture of a proud Nation:
from, 'The Last Samurai'
Katsumoto: ''You believe a Person* can change their* destiny?''
Algren: ''I think a Person* does what *is possible*, until
their destiny is revealed.''
(as in, when I say my first
fluttering 'hello'
I don't assume, they wont be the beginning
of my tears..
nor, when I stutter my tearful goodbyes
do I assume, a blink later
we won't be back in each others arms
or that this parting, may
be a necessary, divergence
in my life
delivering me, eventually
to much warmer, arms ..)
anyway, forgive
my laboured writing
but you probably know
what I'm trying to get at
better than myself..
thanks for sharing! such relatable words
Thank you dear Poet. We are individuals because we are capable of thinking differently. I know perpetual and perennial philosophy, so I write that way.
The pull off a soul which you may know from earlier life is stronger, if you feel that strong vibration.... may be you'd have a different perspective. And yes, I agree that practical world is different.
Hello Max
this is lovely positive spin on mourning a love that is gone,
great job! tchau...Cassia
Thank you!
I like it. A lot.
Thank You!
Yw!
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