how long would it take for me
to snap,
to snap
i ask myself why,
i ask myself why
i’m trying to keep this world together,
i’m tired of keeping my life together
this house,
it’s falling apart
the words,
they won’t come out of my mouth
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Comments2
This feels like genuine expression. How the mind formulates things on an instants notice ... Just those kinds of thoughts. Broken, yet also complete. Thanks for sharing
The use of repetition here is quite effective and not annoying. It's great when lines are put to good use! Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
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