Missing that one soul
You really loved and for
whom you really cared
Every day a mountain to climb
Every hour, hoping
That you find them in a crowd
Somewhere out there
Knowing that even when
They visit in your dream
To tell you, they are with you
Waking up
You know, that it's not true
And certainly not fair
Missing that special love
And its richness
That made us who were are
Having hold of our own emotion
Standing by our memories
Holding them regardless
Like a hologram that we always see
Love doesn't fade
Neither should She or He.
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I was expecting this to be a fine poem - and it was! lol. 🙂
Well why you laughing then LOL 🤣
Cos I was thinking - I expect teef will be OK too - and they were / are! heehee.
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Beautifully penned Teddy ❤️
From the bottom of my heart, thank you dearest Sax. 💖
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I feel it 💔
Thank you, I feel it too every day but it's good to write it all down and share because like you say you felt it too. Thank you dear 0121_pedro, very nice to meet you. 💖
nice to meet you too. A friend recently said the same to me…’write it all down’.
Loss, grief, heartbreak…wounds we keep, but we can heal in time, with reflection and keeping that love.
Yes i have been writing for as long as I can remember about this type theme, and it does give healing. 💖
I am learning just that. I’ve been writing but never publishing.
Mom leaving made me change, and I started with my first one ‘I miss you’ which hurt to write but i am so glad I did.
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I think when you need people, they come back to you. I'm never sure if humans have that telepathy to the dead or not, but in dark times they come back to say hello, and sometimes give you the kick you need.
I\'m very fortunate to see those I've lost in my dreams , although when my brother comes I always wake up believing his loss was in fact the dream he died when he was 25 I was a year younger, and it was my first taste of loss. Thank you for your beautiful words dear Paul so.much appreciate them. 💖
25 is life changing for any one person to face. I know people say it will get better through time, but that's not really true, is it. The only truth is, nothing life can throw at you bothers you, cos you've protected yourself against it now.
There's a lot of truth in your words today. But a big truth missing too. Past loves were wonderful if we only look at what was right and that's mostly what we do. But those loves failed either for mutual reasons or that person was a wrong-un for us.
But heck... gimmie those sweet dreams where everything is rosey and i go off to work knackered and race home again to be re-knackered.
Thank you for the pleasant memories.
Ah but I am not speaking of lovers loss here my dear Dusk, I am speaking of anyone we have happened to love in this case it is about my mother and my brother and my best friend who were all very young when they left earth, fortunately I've never lost a lover to death (as yet) thank you dear friend this one counts simply of anyone who you loved and that has passed. 💖
Biggest of hugs 🤗
My dear Teddy, to say you struck a deep nerve in my heart and soul with this one would be an understatement. Your words so very true. I love when you dip your pen in the inkwell of love and bless the page with your words. 😉
Awe, thank you dearest A.P words coming from you most welcome, and most appreciated
(I'm feeling a little lost at the moment) but I'm keeping myself focused so truly grateful for your kindness.
💖 Thank you dear friend. 💖
The loss of a loved one is never good-bye, just "I'll see you later". 💞
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Very true words Teddy. My Mum and Dad and sisters come to my mind. Lovely memories.
Dear Rozina, I'm so glad you felt this 💖 thank you my dear friend
So true Teddy, love doesn't fade or go when you think and dream of loved ones passed and present.
Andy
Thank you so much dear Andy, for these beautiful words. 💖
Nice fine write teddy !! Loved your Love poem.
Dearest Vamsi, thank you dear friend love never dies, and so all we can do is also accept the pain when they are no longer with us. 💖
well penned my friend from end to end ................................ Neville 💖
Thank you dear Neville, we all miss someone and I know like me for you it's also your mum. 💖 Big hugs and best of British for the coming days I'm thinking of you and yours. 💖
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