while it may be true
that the way to a man’s
heart is through his stomach,
i chose to crack open my
ribcage for you
and your longing was just
as hungry as mine,
two beasts that devour
in the same way
what a feast
my heart would make for you,
my love
all you have to do is ask
and i will fill this table to creaking
with all the foods you enjoy,
and drink to chase back the light
and maybe i’ll leave in the morning,
or you’ll beat me to that particular punchline,
but when we were
when we are
together
i forget the rest
- Author: Boaz Priestly (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 16th, 2022 02:33
- Category: Love
- Views: 17
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, James Michael
Comments2
'and your longing was just
as hungry as mine,
two beasts that devour
in the same way
what a feast'..
(from music to choice wording
and bated, breath - pacing
you've imbued, so much sincerity
I can't help
but wear these words, all day
as they linger, between my thoughts
and sway me to once again
dip - in
those idolised reembraces
of once, forgotten scenes
and fantasy musings
of future connections, as yet
unforeseen...)
(Brilliant!!!
thank you, dear cherished Poet)
Very happy with this one! Thank you for reading
Love can be a fickle mystery. It’s best enjoyed in the moment, is my take on this one. Very well written in your unique style, my talented friend.
Love is the sweetest when noticed. I am very fortunate to have loved a man like the captain for so long. Always good to hear from you, my friend!
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