i stand here, on my feet,
looking down into the ethereal body of water
it's calling me,
my vocation
the orbs above me,
they cry out to me, too
urging me to take the step,
walking out the door that's been closed
with my hand
i reach out
and the forgiving breeze holds on,
not letting go,
and drawing me in
i've endured long enough
and now's my time
i lock my eyes,
and let myself go
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there are tons of red bridges
in our world
crimson painted, as if prophetic
warning
of the allure, in those accessible
escape points
to lives, overburdened by chaos
and incessant, strife
but
for every one, individual
defeat, overwhelms
thousands upon, thousands
hear those same exact
whispering 'orbs'
only, they've cultivated an
appreciation and worth
for themselves
that filters, the bulls shit
in those venomous, thought 'orbs'
and so, recognise
how fleeting those words are..
(there was a study done
on those that survived their suicide attempts
and almost all of them, stated
within second of taking the plunge
they immediately realised
in the scope of the existence, they'd
just given - up, on
they were alarmed
at how insignificant, their issues/problems
seemed)
I am not, in any way
trying to belittle your suffering
or the depicted suffering
in your poetry's, voice
I
am merely trying to provide
a long lensed, wide scoped
perspective
on the moment, your poetry portrays
that we all, need
to survive
so we may, be offered an opportunity
at a better, day
dawning, in our next experience
of aurora's, greeting..
I wish you all the best
if these words are taken from a personal
point of view or experience
then I laud, your bravery and fight!
and if they are words
empathetically depicting, the horror
realities
some of us are dealing with, everyday
then I laud, your compassionate humanity!
'I wish you Peace, dear Poet
stay strong!'
thank you, for choosing to share
wow,
thanks for the comment L. B.!
i did write this based on my own personal experiences and feelings, but i'm doing alright, so don't worry!
like always, thank you,
and have a good day, dear Poet!
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