Can you whisper in my ear?
Tell me what I want to hear
Feed me all your twisted lies
Watch me fall to my demise
Make my mind O so weak
As I listen to you speak
Leave me falling very deep
Can’t get out, so hard to breathe
Why’d I listen to you speak?
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Author:
me.winston (
Offline) - Published: May 18th, 2022 16:52
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
(it's not the lies, that hurt
the most
often, it's the fact that
those
spewing the lies, know exactly
how to word them
and what parts of ourselves
to target, for our unsuspecting
gullible, trust
to fall
for their insidious, intentions;
in-short
their lies, only have the capability
to effect us, because
we let down our guards, and that
makes us feel
partly responsible, which hurts
deeper
than it should..)
forgive my opinionated, tangent
I found your wording to be immensely relatable
and your writing's pacing, so enticing..
thanks for sharing
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