Love at 1st Sight

Pearcemelville 兎敏

 

{Who is that?
Oh my     something
Those eyes  Yes}  I draw close 
{these eyes}

{What to say   blup  blop 
hello?}
Tingle  tingling 
my heart racing  palms moist   
   warm
{My teeth  I ate spinach  
like one tooth missing  lovely sight
Big smile   Beeh!}
We reach the buffet 
Our skins touch 
Flush cheeks red as beetroot 
{scrambled eggs
can't beat this feeling}
   
     {tonight?  too fast

You've not been introduced
Myself?  me start?  what to say?
Hi I'm      Come here often ?        
     What do you ?  Do you?}

PARDON ME

{This voice must be directed to me  noone else here}

     Oh that's ok  
               {I enjoyed it, our skin} 

BEETROOT LOOKS NICE

     I like beetroot  {and
                  scrambled eggs}

SO HOW DO YOU COME TO BE HERE?
  

     I like poetry  {Like twice said  no like}
     I find her prose delicate and honest
{Said something really good about her poetry  just the other day  it sounded so mature  like I understand the language of literary critique}

     I find her works illuminating in a modest and fulfilling way  unforced  
yet penetrating

MY THAT IS ASTUTE OF YOU
PLEASE EXCUSE ME  MAY I ASK YOUR NAME?

{It worked!  genius!}  
I gain confidence
{reply with full name?  middle? don't be silly  nickname?  
Ah  the new name I want to use  to match a new relationship   a new Me!
Reply} 
   
I am ....

Exchanging numbers 

Is this  This is happening  
a happening  to me   really
I shall call tonight yes tonight  dash protocol  It's Hype 
This is Love at first Sight

  • Author: Pearcemelville 卯升 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 21st, 2022 09:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: ドキドキ Japanese onomatopoeia 💞 throbbing Heart 💓 Dokidoki
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  • Bella Shepard

    This poem really comes to life as I read it aloud, as if I'm watching the whole interaction played out. 1st love can be breathtaking and your words describe this so poignantly. Great write!



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