{Who is that?
Oh my something
Those eyes Yes} I draw close
{these eyes}
{What to say blup blop
hello?}
Tingle tingling
my heart racing palms moist
warm
{My teeth I ate spinach
like one tooth missing lovely sight
Big smile Beeh!}
We reach the buffet
Our skins touch
Flush cheeks red as beetroot
{scrambled eggs
can't beat this feeling}
{tonight? too fast
You've not been introduced
Myself? me start? what to say?
Hi I'm Come here often ?
What do you ? Do you?}
PARDON ME
{This voice must be directed to me noone else here}
Oh that's ok
{I enjoyed it, our skin}
BEETROOT LOOKS NICE
I like beetroot {and
scrambled eggs}
SO HOW DO YOU COME TO BE HERE?
I like poetry {Like twice said no like}
I find her prose delicate and honest
{Said something really good about her poetry just the other day it sounded so mature like I understand the language of literary critique}
I find her works illuminating in a modest and fulfilling way unforced
yet penetrating
MY THAT IS ASTUTE OF YOU
PLEASE EXCUSE ME MAY I ASK YOUR NAME?
{It worked! genius!}
I gain confidence
{reply with full name? middle? don't be silly nickname?
Ah the new name I want to use to match a new relationship a new Me!
Reply}
I am ....
Exchanging numbers
Is this This is happening
a happening to me really
I shall call tonight yes tonight dash protocol It's Hype
This is Love at first Sight
- Author: Pearcemelville 卯升 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 21st, 2022 09:16
- Comment from author about the poem: ドキドキ Japanese onomatopoeia 💞 throbbing Heart 💓 Dokidoki
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
This poem really comes to life as I read it aloud, as if I'm watching the whole interaction played out. 1st love can be breathtaking and your words describe this so poignantly. Great write!
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