Bedtime (Multiple haikus)

Universal_guarantee

1.

I sink into bed

My true goal is inner peace 

Now to drift away

2. 

The dream world awaits 

As I absorb into bliss 

With no fear of day

3.

My mind forms new worlds

Potential is infinite 

My pillow; a cloud

 

  • Author: LgLL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2022 00:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: I am sleepy; I have no idea how to write haikus but this was fun nonetheless.
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • tallisman

    Brilliantly done! It’s a form I am coming to love and spend hours on, I used to do sudoku but now it’s haiku/senryu instead! That’s the power of this site, I was only vaguely aware of these before I joined and now I’m hooked. If only I was good at them though! Thought yours are really good and thanks….

    • Universal_guarantee

      Thank you so much for reading; I hadn't heard of senryu poetry before this comment, so I must agree that this site has been very fun for learning about different forms of poetry!

    • orchidee

      Good writes UG.
      You write them while asleep?! lol.
      I talk some rubbish. heehee.

    • L. B. Mek

      beautiful, life-affirming Senryu's
      hope fuelled and accessibly, honest
      devoid, of any cynically futile lament..
      thanks for sharing

    • MendedFences27

      Very well written Senryu poems. In particular, I enjoyed #3. I'm sure others would choose otherwise. Human nature gives an unlimited supply of subject matter for these kinds of poems. Yours are very well done. - Phil A.

      • Universal_guarantee

        #3 was my favorite too actually The human perception truly provides much opportunity in terms of writing.



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