1.
I sink into bed
My true goal is inner peace
Now to drift away
2.
The dream world awaits
As I absorb into bliss
With no fear of day
3.
My mind forms new worlds
Potential is infinite
My pillow; a cloud
1.
I sink into bed
My true goal is inner peace
Now to drift away
2.
The dream world awaits
As I absorb into bliss
With no fear of day
3.
My mind forms new worlds
Potential is infinite
My pillow; a cloud
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Brilliantly done! It’s a form I am coming to love and spend hours on, I used to do sudoku but now it’s haiku/senryu instead! That’s the power of this site, I was only vaguely aware of these before I joined and now I’m hooked. If only I was good at them though! Thought yours are really good and thanks….
Thank you so much for reading; I hadn't heard of senryu poetry before this comment, so I must agree that this site has been very fun for learning about different forms of poetry!
Good writes UG.
You write them while asleep?! lol.
I talk some rubbish. heehee.
hahaha thanks mate!!
beautiful, life-affirming Senryu's
hope fuelled and accessibly, honest
devoid, of any cynically futile lament..
thanks for sharing
as always, thank you for reading.
Very well written Senryu poems. In particular, I enjoyed #3. I'm sure others would choose otherwise. Human nature gives an unlimited supply of subject matter for these kinds of poems. Yours are very well done. - Phil A.
#3 was my favorite too actually The human perception truly provides much opportunity in terms of writing.
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