I am not in a situation
which you can call a sad plight,
in fact, such deep moments
are moments of great delight.
Every moment is deep enough
to overwrite events of the past,
How can I think of the future
when I am facing the present blast.
Are you really not keen
to know about my concern?
or have you given up
your power to discern?
You may be planning
on how to thrive,
whereas I am focussing
on just keeping alive.
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: When someone who has the remedy but says that for your good I am moving away and find your remedy somewhere else, what logic is that..... we will all heal with our positivity. A friend in need is friend indeed.
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Comments3
nicely penned Malik. the words flow smoothly and the lyrical quality is excellent.
'Every moment is deep enough
to overwrite events of the past,
How can I think of the future
when I am facing the present blast.'
an enchanting read, thank you!
Thank you! We do need moments of happiness.
A good rhyme feels good this time of year, on an evening like this. Thank you for sharing. I, also have experienced a near death experience.
Thank you Jonas. I really wish if you could share it. Sending you a PM.
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