when roses bloomed

arqios

There you are, 
Playing domestics; 
Passing each other
 
Cups & saucers
 
While I sit back, 
Being waited upon
To take it all in - 
 
This apparition
Of simple bliss.
 
Why was this not possible
When roses bloomed
In the garden? 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 28th, 2022 05:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • MrNobody40

    Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

    • arqios

      Thank you, Nicoli, for reading and commenting. /Rik.

    • Aradhya

      'When Roses bloomed in the garden ' this line seems very simple but has a very deep meaning. Absolutely beautiful dear poet great lines!❤

      • arqios

        Thanks kindly, Aradhya.

      • orchidee

        Good write CB.

        • arqios

          Thanks orchidee.

        • JudyStella

          Beautiful poem! As I understand it’s about romance in a cafe. The use of symbols are awesome

          • arqios

            Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. You are much appreciated.

          • Jonas Robinson

            This has great word play and advanced imagery. Thank you for sharing. 🙂

            • arqios

              Thanks Jonas, you are kindly appreciated. /Rik.



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