Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind
There you are,
Playing domestics;
Passing each other
Cups & saucers
While I sit back,
Being waited upon
To take it all in -
This apparition
Of simple bliss.
Why was this not possible
When roses bloomed
In the garden?
- Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 28th, 2022 05:10
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 27
- Users favorite of this poem: Aradhya
Comments5
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Nicoli, for reading and commenting. /Rik.
'When Roses bloomed in the garden ' this line seems very simple but has a very deep meaning. Absolutely beautiful dear poet great lines!❤
Thanks kindly, Aradhya.
Good write CB.
Thanks orchidee.
Beautiful poem! As I understand it’s about romance in a cafe. The use of symbols are awesome
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. You are much appreciated.
This has great word play and advanced imagery. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
Thanks Jonas, you are kindly appreciated. /Rik.
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