Near suicide

sadkw33n

It starts like snowing, slowly and cool

Then it leaves you freezing in a colourless view

You try to escape it, you're trying in vain 

Every part of your being screames out in pain 

You wish that tonight you'll die in your sleep

Maybe by taking more than just one pill 

Now It doesn't matter what doctors will say 

They can never save you, so you end it today 

 

Ask them if it's worth the price that you pay 

To spare them some tears you're hiding your pain 

Ask them if they could survive all this too

They would kill themselves to escape, just like you 

 

You are stuck wondering on an endless road 

You're falling and falling, will it ever stop? 

Words can't express the pain that you feel

But you won't even try, your lips are sealed

The world won't notice what you're going through

Now people avoid you, that's nothing new

So you're crying alone stuck in your room

Thinking about how you're gonna leave soon 

 

Ask them if it's worth the price that you pay 

To spare them some tears you're hiding your pain 

Ask them if they could survive all this too

They would kill themselves to escape, like you do

  • Author: sadkw33n (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 28th, 2022 07:00
  • Category: Sad
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  • JudyStella

    I’ve been there too and this is a perfect interpretation of the feelings you feel when you reach the abyss, a dark place where you feel lonely and hopeless.

  • JudyStella

    But hang in there, it’s worth it to fight the struggles of present for a better future

    • sadkw33n

      I couldn't put it in better words. Thank you for commenting again! I really appreciate it! And thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I am actually new to poetry and it is really encouraging to read comments like yours! Thanks again 😊

      • JudyStella

        Welcome aboard dear poet! Hoping to see more!❤️

      • Jonas Robinson

        Sometimes, I would like to murder the doctor. But, others I'm grateful. Thank you for sharing.

        • sadkw33n

          Thank you for commenting 🙂

        • Blueledge

          I've felt this way too. Especially when my daughter died.
          Now I have come to realise that there is a 100% chance that one day I will die. So I may as well find something today that I know I will enjoy doing. I'll find something tomorrow too. Because when I do eventually die I'll never enjoy anything ever again.
          Your poem was interesting to read and I hope you can find enjoyment.

          • sadkw33n

            I'm so sorry for your loss. About a month ago my cousin died in a motorcycle accident.He was only 18 years old. At his funeral the weather was windy and his mother, my aunt, was practically begging him saying "Get up my son. It's cold, we have to go". I will never forget the "colour" of her voice. It was the saddest sound I've ever heard. I've seen how devastating it is for a parent to lose their child, I'm sorry you had to experience that. Thank you for commenting. I hope you do enjoy your days, on behalf of your daughter too, as much as possible.



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