heaven can hear
my inner doubts and fears
and wild ideas
about the future
and heaven felt
when this angel fell
all the lies he's dealt
for a little redemption
and heaven knows
the fire below
the wild blown hope
to live life free
and heaven knows
the hell inside of me
show me a glimpse
behind the eclipse
and save me
from apocalypse
and heaven knows
the fire below
the wild blown hope
hanging on one thin rope
and heaven sees
the hell inside of me
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Author:
noah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 28th, 2022 10:26
- Comment from author about the poem: got inspired by judystella below https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-147131
- Category: Spiritual
- Views: 31
- Users favorite of this poem: JudyStella, Jeannie.
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Comments3
OMG !! 😭This is BRILLIANT !! I am overjoyed that I was able to inspire such a masterpiece!! such representation of emotions!!
I love this verse❤️!!
and heaven knows
the fire below
the wild blown hope
hanging on one thin rope
It speaks to the heart! A beautiful creation dear Noah ! I love it!
Haha thank you dear Judy, those are kind words!! Wouldn't have posted this without seeing yours first.
😊
Two stellar poets, shining in the heavens, orbiting each other in beautiful verse. This is such a beautiful poem.
thank you bella!! much appreciated
Good writing )) I completely believe in angels
Thank you! So do I rose
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