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languale

There are many blue flowers,

that I’d like to pick.

Go traveling to make progress,

but don’t be too quick !

A blue flower with a beautiful root,

that I’d love to pick.

But be patient with your foot,

or you’ll risk it to kick !

And the blue flower,

the one I would have picked,

cannot be picked after it got kicked.

  • Author: languale (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2022 06:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: The blue flower represents your biggest dreams that you are determined to achieve. You should invest time in it, but try not to hurry too much, you will only put yourself under too much pressure. The beautiful root of the flower shows that there is a lot of work behind a dream and that you cannot achieve it overnight. You have to be patient, otherwise you ruin the whole thing for yourself; the flower cannot be picked after it got kicked. If you have questions, let me know! Feel free to express your opinion on this topic in the comments. :)
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 80
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  • hzugman

    Very nice languale. I particularly like the final line. You have a gift.

    • languale

      That's very nice, thank you for commenting! I like to work with rhymes 🙂

    • dean langmuir

      Wonderful first poem you have submitted,your comments are bang on,thanks for sharing and reminding us to follow our dreams,poet on.

      • languale

        Thank you for commenting.

      • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

        I absolutely love the reflection in this poem. A beautiful read!🍀

        • languale

          Thank you very much, i put a lot of work into it.

          • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

            Do you plan on writing more like this?

          • Thebeezybee

            Blue is a beautiful colour. Using it to describe one's dream is also nice.

          • orchidee

            Good write L.
            Nope, that's not me looking in for many of those 28 views (the last time I looked in!) lol.

          • M. Evermore

            I quite like your poem. It has a great metaphor, and you used it well to get your point across to the audience. Well done!

          • JudyStella

            Loved the imagery you have applied! And the line where you say don’t be too quick shows that success comes slow and to stay patient. Loved the message and the style!

          • a thousand wishes

            Beautiful imagery, the metaphor for dreams was absolutely amazing and I really liked reading this. it makes me wanna follow my dreams or at least figure out what I want my life to be like

          • Noah Malice

            very synchronous moment you recommending me read this. i've been reading the instigating agent for a while now and can't seem to stop thinking about dreams.
            anyway, i love your form and i'd love to see a better resolution to this!! not knocking it at all, but you could definitely do more with this concept and i'd love to see it. will be following you to see what you do.

          • cherm

            I enjoyed your poem L. Great job with imagery and flow. Great choice of color as well. 😊

          • Accidental Poet

            Well penned languale. A dream is a gift you give to yourself. 😉

          • L. B. Mek

            (such beautiful imagery
            a wonderfully realised poem
            brilliantly, anchored
            and built around that 'blue flower'
            metaphor
            or dream symbolism..
            thanks for sharing)
            but
            some flowers are sturdy
            even after being trampled
            they still fight
            their way, back up
            you'll see them
            circling themselves around
            leaning, on a sturdy frame
            all they need, is a chance
            or a helping hand
            the rest, they'll do themselves..
            we need only, keep believing
            in them...!
            (dear poet, just fyi
            Please note, you need not comment
            on any of my scribbles
            for me
            to comment on your poetry
            if I see it
            and feel like it, i will comment
            at every opportunity, I promise
            most of us here at MPS
            don't have
            a 'quid pro quo', culture)

          • crackingmeadows

            Beautiful. The symbolism is meaningful. Thank you for writing this!

          • Natalia B. Odair

            You have a lot of potential!! Thank you so much for writing this. I enjoy reading poems with a deeper, symbolic meaning, and this one takes the cake. The layers of depth are wonderful. Thanks for telling me to check it out- it was definitely a beautifully written, enjoyable read.



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