sorry i'm falling
into a pit of despair
can't seem to
convince myself to care
sorry i'm dreaming
been self-deceiving
didn't even notice
you were there
and when i look up at you
in the way that i do
with my eyes holding blue
i wish you would know
what's going on below
lay my heart true and bare
sorry i'm drifting
away on a cloud
i don't think i'll be
coming down
i know it's crazy
and this life is amazing
but from up here
it's a little bit hazy
and when you look up at me
do i at least look free
drifting around on my own
i wish it were clear
what's going on up here
but for now i'll be drifting alone
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Author:
noah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 2nd, 2022 15:22
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
This was a very strong poem, like I can feel the emotion just through your words and it made me sad the meaning of this poem but at the same time hopeful because I know that feeling and at least I'm not the only one
When your love takes you and where despair does likewise, we can be transported and the distance is not physical. And most decidedly a very lonesome place to be. Exquisite expression, Gon. And not an easy do. Thanks for sharing.
Good write Gon.
Ohhh, you'll look up and see me. I'll always be there. I hang around like a.......bad smell! lol.
haha you stink orchidee please shower
Or more refined - a bad penny!
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