Weatherscape

Morwenna

Roaring winds: white surf assaults

Rocks of black in pewter seas.

Swirling, crashing water heaves

While all around the seagulls waltz.

  • Author: Morwenna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 3rd, 2022 10:58
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm..
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Comments3

  • a thousand wishes

    Your words made me really imagine the setting, so basically nice imagery, I could feel, smell,hear and see this poem, keep up the good work

  • MendedFences27

    Wow. Love this poem. It captures the scene with originality and precision.
    A great little poem. - Phil A.

    • Morwenna

      I was making notes for the poem as I looked at the seagulls and waves, trying to manage the pen and paper in the wind.

      • MendedFences27

        Those seagulls are mean. They'll snatch your lunch right out of your hand. They did mine.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ah - a lovely read Morwenna - From title onwards this little gem captures the scene with such atmospheric conception - and as for your finalé - - my cheering applause for those waltzing seagulls An innovative four -liner which must go into my list of favourites.

        • Morwenna

          Aww! Thank you!



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