in this moment
there is only you
the rest is slowly
fading from view
as we embrace
as we kiss
the pain and guilt
dies with this
i give up my soul
i leave it behind
i give up my body
i give up my mind
keep on going
towards the feeling
i give up my pain
give in to the healing
all those memories
what did they know
now i leave them
to the world below
in this moment
there is only me
sweet surrender
has set you free
give me your body
give me your mind
give me your sense of
the passing of time
keep on going
you’re almost free
give all that’s in you
give it to me
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Comments2
break-up's
don't have to be so toxic
for some, relationships
that evolve
to realm's of friendship
we can, excavate
something
tangibly beautiful, in our
sweet sorrow...
as your Poetry, poignantly
alludes to
'at least in my interpretation of it'
dear Poet
thank you! a Great read
that’s a beautiful interpretation l.b., thank you for reading
Beautiful piece, love the structure and your words, well, let´s just say I felt all your words very deeply
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