I’m sinking
I’m sinking and I don’t know how stop
lower and lower
Did you know the RMS titanic took only 3 hours to sink
I’ve been sinking a lot longer than that
My happiness is clinging on like a passenger
One who was promised a simple voyage
This passenger has accepted his fate
You can see it on his face
The hope that used to live behind his eyes has packed its bags and moved out
The bags are full of dreams for the prospects, and memories
They’re gone now
Yet this passenger clings onto the ship
As it sinks
Lower and lower
-
Author:
H (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 7th, 2022 02:49
- Comment from author about the poem: this poem is the second in 'the numbers project' and this centres around giving up
- Category: Sad
- Views: 20
Offline)
Comments1
The Titanic was RMS Titanic not HMS. HMS signifies a ship of the U.K. military. RMS denotes the ship carries Royal Mail.
thanks so much i wasnt completely sure when writing it but will update it now thanks!
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.